FeedBack Video

Here is a video of some peer feed back about my digi pack. The three students all look at my CD cover and my advertisement and answer some questions for us. Some of the feed back was positive which I can use to improve my work and other parts were ideas on how I can make them better.

A positive from all the feed back is that the genre is shown through both pieces of work. This shows that the research I have done into the genre has worked and I have pulled out the correct conventions needed to make my piece seem professional for my genre.

Another positive is that the colour scheme seems to work as well. The feed back seem to show me that they like the blue as it is a calm and relaxed colour.

However, it could be improved with some of the locations that we have used, as said in the video "they seem a bit random" this can he,p me because I know that I should try and have a strong theme that can link the locations together making seem more professional.

Teacher Research Assessment

Here is a teacher assessment that I have been given. I have been given an A for my research so far. As you can see it is a low A and there is a lot of work that I can do to help improve my research to make it a stronger A. 

Peer Planning Assessment

This is my peer assessment that I have been given back. I got a B on my planning so far, and my target is an A. This means I will need to step up the detail in my work and try new ways to make my work creative and visual for the audience to look at. 

Peer Research Assessment

This is my Peer feed back for my research. I got a B, and my target is an A therefore I need to start to go into more detail linking it to other parts of my research like using the theories in other posts.